 | Discussion on: Image 1424 - "Amsterdam" |
| Discussion on: Image 1424 - "Amsterdam" |
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| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1424 - "Amsterdam" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #1 October 17th 2007 17:00:19 | Ohhh, headless parent alert; that's perfect for Halloween! Not so good for a travel photo the rest of the year though; on that basis I might be tempted to crop her out ;) I'm guessing the kid and/or the bicycles are the subject here? The bicycles and the canal do say Amsterdam to me, so this is successful from that perspective. I want to crop just to the left of the kid, and then leave the bicycles in the background, but that still leaves a parental elbow stuck in frame. OK here's my best shot at it; cropped hard on the left, some from the top too. Added vignetting using Filter/Distort/LensCorrection. Slightly desaturated the parent using the Sponge tool. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #2 October 17th 2007 17:00:53 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #3 October 17th 2007 17:01:33 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #4 October 17th 2007 17:03:54 | OK; perhaps it's that the image is too small. I'll try again one last time. Sorry about this! |
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| Chris Simeur (cssimeur) Msg: #5 October 17th 2007 21:15:33 | Yeah, I took the photo quickly because I was afraid I would miss a nice opportunity, and then realized the parental unit placement kind of messed it up. The revision seems a little better as the child and bikes occupy more space, but it might be something that is ultimately not fixable. Nice job with cropping though, thanks. | |||||||||||||||||||||
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