 | Discussion on: Image 1419 - "Suwon Hwaseong I" |
| Discussion on: Image 1419 - "Suwon Hwaseong I" |
Discussion on: Image 1419 - "Suwon Hwaseong I" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1419 - "Suwon Hwaseong I" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Justin Watson (Justin) Msg: #1 September 25th 2007 11:53:33 | I think you tried to do too much with the photo. Firstly i'm not a fan of the framing. Then you have the person walking and the tower. I'd have loved to see the person closer i think with the stone wall behind them. I realise you were probably in the wrong spot to do this though. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #2 September 27th 2007 06:34:24 | I'd try some cropping, if I had an editing program at hand. Perhaps chop the bottom off just below where the light circle hits the right hand wall. And take off some of the left side. That would make your person a larger part of the frame and give more power to the tower in the background. You've got two good elements here but they seem to get lost in all the other 'stuff'. Or I could be wrong. Yet again.... ;o) | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #3 October 2nd 2007 00:12:16 | The thing that immediately strikes me here is the yin-yang shape formed by the shadows; particularly the way she forms the dot on the symbol. Very nicely placed. That said I feel the stones framing it let the shot down; they really needed to be more in focus, or even perhaps not in the shot at all. So if it were me I'd consider an even more vertical crop, just to the left of the tower, and just enough on the right to show her shadow fully. What I'd really like is a zoomed in version of just the woman and the yin-yang. She also appears a bit too hot, I suspect half to a stop less would bring her under control; but I do realise you don't have that much flexibility with a compact... | |||||||||||||||||||||
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