 | Discussion on: Image 146 - "Coconut" |
| Discussion on: Image 146 - "Coconut" |
Discussion on: Image 146 - "Coconut" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 146 - "Coconut" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 June 24th 2005 00:15:47 |
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #2 June 24th 2005 00:18:49 | I like this 'piece of trash as art' shot. It's fun seeing possibilities in cast away stuff. You did a good job with focus, framing and exposure. I tried a small crop off the bottom to see if the husk would 'float' a bit without the dark area. And I cloned out the bit of table that intrudes on the left. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #3 June 30th 2005 12:15:41 | Before clicking? I think I would have tried moving the husk to that some of the interior was visible. Perhaps simply spinning it 180 degrees would allow light to hit some of the inner fibers while still giving you a good dose of green. (It's leaning away from the sun.) | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Ben Wouters (baw) Msg: #4 July 1st 2005 07:54:01 | Good suggestion Bob. I've been too much in reporter mode probably , just recording the views. A little arranging and tweaking isn't that bad. | |||||||||||||||||||||
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