Discussion on: Image 1377 - "Chicken Run" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| (StraightnoChaser) Msg: #1 July 9th 2007 21:11:38 | Interesting door...but the crop looks 'forced' to me and does not focus the attention....could be either the door or the passing chicken. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Russ Pearce (rrruss) Msg: #2 July 9th 2007 21:21:55 | There was some pretty bad stuff either side of the door. The tight crop was essential but I see what you mean. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #3 July 9th 2007 21:27:29 | Nice shot Russ! Strong colours you've captured here; the rooster really seems to rule the roost though ;) There are a few things I'd alter if it were mine, firstly I'd like to see more seperation in intensity between the rooster and the background; as it stands he blends in a bit too much I think. There's also a bit of barrel distortion, and I'm not 100% sure about the rotation either. To that end; I used ShiftN to correct the verticals/rotation slightly, then used Photoshop/Filters/Distort/LensCorrection to fix the slight barrel distortion. Copied the rooster onto a new layer, then used the Burn tool to darken the background and make him stand out a little more. |
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