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| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #1 July 5th 2007 00:54:21 | Nice shot Russ! Interesting to see some religious folk here who aren't Buddhists for a change ;) A couple of things I'd suggest; firstly, try cropping some off the top and consider removing some from the left and right too. My eye's drawn to the guy on the left in the foreground as his shirt is pretty bright, but he doesn't improve the photo, so perhaps consider toning that down a bit. I'd also think about toning down the building and sign in the background behind the icon, as it doesn't contrast with it at all. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Russ Pearce (rrruss) Msg: #2 July 8th 2007 22:45:52 | Ok, I've had a go! |
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| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #3 July 9th 2007 01:16:27 | An improvement overall I think, yes. What do you think though? | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Russ Pearce (rrruss) Msg: #4 July 9th 2007 13:55:57 | I like the new version but I would be much happier if I could get rid of that road sign! There's too much detail behind it to simply clone it out. Any suggestions? | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #5 July 9th 2007 20:26:38 | You could simply clone it out anyway ;) The trick is to clone along lines of detail, and to try and visualize what the structure should look like before you start. Also in this version I've applied Filter/Distort/LensCorrection; Vignette. See what you think! |
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| Russ Pearce (rrruss) Msg: #6 July 9th 2007 21:20:34 | Wow, that is excellent. I think the picture is finished! | |||||||||||||||||||||
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