 | Discussion on: Image 1349 - "Bull" |
| Discussion on: Image 1349 - "Bull" |
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| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1349 - "Bull" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #1 June 2nd 2007 15:17:14 | I recognise this guy, I think. Wasn't he by Mottisfont Abbey? Green looks a bit "not green" - maybe a white/colour balance issue - try warming it a bit and see whether that improves things. Also less detail than I'd expect, particularly on the (frame) right hand flank - noisy? or is it just jeber-JPEG'd? | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #2 June 7th 2007 06:58:41 | Something like this? |
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| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #3 June 7th 2007 15:49:28 | Better I think, yes. Maybe also do a bit of brightening around the eye to make it stand out more? | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #4 June 7th 2007 17:09:19 | Enough? |
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| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #5 June 7th 2007 18:14:14 | If I'm absolutely honest, I can't see a difference between R1 and R2? | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #6 June 7th 2007 18:24:59 | I uploaded again just to make sure that I posted the latest version. Did you look at Rev 1 & Rev 2 side by side? I can go lighter around the eye but I thought I had gone enough. I lightened up the surround, darkened the iris, increased the catchlight. If more, which element? |
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| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #7 June 8th 2007 02:04:49 | OK, I see the difference now - sorry, had to load them into Photoshop and overlay them before it was obvious. Couldn't do that before, as I didn't have Photoshop installed. It's now running again, this time under Vista RTM :) I had in mind a wider area brightening - to make the eye really stand out. The eye being the thing we instinctively seem to focus on... I wouldn't worry about it. I'm not sure it would look particularly natural anyway. | |||||||||||||||||||||
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