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Discussion on: Image 1319 - "Great Wall Simatia"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1319 - "Great Wall Simatia"

Original - Trisha Shadwell (photobug)
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CameraCanon » Canon Eos 20d
Original Date2000-05-02 04:13:07
Focal Length73 mm
Aperturef 11
ISO1600
Exposure Time1/15 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
Great wall at Simatia at sunset.
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


May 17th 2007
07:48:34
Very nice framing.  You've got converging diagonal lines leading to the tower which work well.

I'd suggest bringing some of the detail out of the shadows.  I selected the dark bottom and use the Shadow/Highlight tool and then sharpened.  Then I inverted the selection and increased the saturation in the sky (just to show you that it could be done).

There is tremendous Jpeg blocking in my version.  That's probably because I was working from a very compressed version.  If you start from your original file I suspect you can produce a much better version.

Looking forward to seeing what you can do with it.

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