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Discussion on: Image 1303 - "Trash lady"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1303 - "Trash lady"

Original - Trisha Shadwell (photobug)
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Revision: 1 - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Photographers Note:
Taken in Xian China
Image Details:
CameraCanon » Canon Eos 20d
Original Date2007-03-17 16:54:37
Focal Length90 mm
Aperturef 5.6
ISO200
Exposure Time1/250 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


May 14th 2007
06:32:52
Good job framing this one.  I think a bit more could come off the left side to clean it up a bit.

It's just a bit over exposed.  See the pure white area on the top of her load?  A bit blown out - no detail.  It wouldn't be hard to clone some back in.

I used the Shadow/Highlight tool to bring our your subject just a bit more.  And I used the Sponge tool to desaturate the blue tarp(?) in the upper right.  It was drawing my eye away from the subject.

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