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Discussion on: Image 1298 - "Alone..."

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1298 - "Alone..."

Original - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Revision: 3 - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Photographers Note:
A Chin fisherman sets off to his camp on his bamboo raft.

North of Mrauk U, Myanmar.
Image Details:
CameraPentax Corporation » Pentax K100d
Original Date2007-02-02 15:00:08
Focal Length200 mm
Aperturef 5.6
ISO200
Exposure Time1/2000 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #7


May 13th 2007
18:58:06
Here's the uncropped version.  (And I hope better processed version.)

I trimmed the Original version down to fit with the "suggestion of thirds" but don't really like it as much as the way I originally shot the picture.  The more centered version, IMO, better portrays the isolation of the man on his raft.

Feedback?

And I thought I had better removed the vignetting before posting.  Guess this needs more work.

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PeeWee - I'm pretty sure that it's a compression problem.  You can see the problem by looking at the Rev 3 version.  Those squiggles don't show in the version that I uploaded.  (Pretty ego boosting that you might want to use my shot as your screensaver.  If you want I'll email you a non-compressed copy.)  

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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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