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Discussion on: Image 1296 - "So she sez to me...."

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1296 - "So she sez to me...."

Original - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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CameraFujifilm » Finepix F10
Original Date2006-02-01 10:31:39
Focal Length12.2 mm
Aperturef 3.4
ISO800
Exposure Time1/45 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
[Full Exif]
Photographers Note:
Vientiane, Laos.  (I think.)
(StraightnoChaser)
Msg: #1


May 11th 2007
16:28:45
One more try to download my version.
(StraightnoChaser)
Msg: #2


May 11th 2007
16:31:33
shadow and highlight and a tighter crop. Bit of repair just above the head of the foreground fish.

Revision: 3
(StraightnoChaser)
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #3


May 11th 2007
17:41:12
Thanks for that.  I revisited the shot and did an even tighter crop.  I think the original version is too cluttered and that takes away from the 'cartoon'.

And I played with the facial features a bit.

In the original post I think I was hanging on to the arowana (clown knife fish) in the upper left.  Back, many years ago, I had a girl friend who really wanted an arowana but they were too expensive.  I still find it interesting to see them for sale as food in Asian markets.

Revision: 4
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)

Revision: 3
(StraightnoChaser)