 | Discussion on: Image 119 - "Pretty in Pink" |
| Discussion on: Image 119 - "Pretty in Pink" |
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| Ben Wouters (baw) Msg: #1 June 22nd 2005 14:39:46 | Hi Bob, my first try at commenting on Jeber. Surreal colour for the sweater. Looks like a ladys sweater. For me the two guys are competing for attention, taking away the focus on the one in the pink sweater. How do you like a simpler version like this one? |
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #2 June 22nd 2005 15:10:21 | Thanks Ben. I like your version as it hones in on the main player. It is, most likely, a woman's sweater -something that made its way to this neighborhood via a charity donation. But here you've got a guy wearing it as there aren't the same social norms. I also like the uncropped version because it has more to look at. I like the stove, looks like it was made using a steel drum as a form. And I really like the posse of the woman on the right. The first time I looked at this shot I thought she had a problem with her neck. But I found her in another frame standing upright. So it's just and interesting quizzical pose. I am thinking that the image might be helped by toning down the light coming through the rear window. | |||||||||||||||||||||
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