 | Discussion on: Image 975 - "Sleeping III" |
| Discussion on: Image 975 - "Sleeping III" |
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| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 975 - "Sleeping III" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 April 30th 2007 16:51:52 | I'm thinking that this one might have been better if you had pulled back a bit. And perhaps a bit to your left. The foreground is somewhat cluttered and it's not all that obvious as to what your subject is sleeping on. If you could have shown a wheel or two .... And showing a bit more of the people sleeping in the background would increase the story. And some note. Pictures like this can really benefit from a caption. IMO. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Peter A (Peter) Msg: #2 May 2nd 2007 02:51:54 | Thanks Bob. I'd actually forgotten all about this picture until the massive jump it recieved. Captions might include "Still Life on a Baggage Cart" "Layover" "40 winks waiting for Homeland Security" "Don't eat the food" or "Rip Van Winkle couldn't have missed that flight" This was part of my St. Louis bundle from that horrific tornado layover last summer. | |||||||||||||||||||||
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