 | Discussion on: Image 145 - "Sunset at Byron Bay" |
| Discussion on: Image 145 - "Sunset at Byron Bay" |
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| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 145 - "Sunset at Byron Bay" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Andy Leach (RedAndy) Msg: #1 June 21st 2005 06:52:08 | Hi David, I like the colour in the sunset and the foliage. The sky didn't add much to the image for me - so I removed most of it :-) To balance out the sky I then removed some of the water to try and keep in with the 'rule of thirds' and ended up with a panoramic. It feels (imho :) more expansive and immediate than the original. The branch that I removed does have quite a bit of character to it and from a different angle you might be able to get it to frame the rocks(?) |
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| David Raymond (David) Msg: #2 June 21st 2005 07:35:38 | Hi Andy, I know what you mean about the sky - it's pretty ordinary. I tried to have the branches frame the rocks (they're Julian Rocks) as I considered them the main focus of the photo, however I needed to be about 15 feet tall as the foliage covered the scene from that part of the walkway. Thanks for your feedback, David. | |||||||||||||||||||||
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