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Discussion on: Image 144 - "Sunrise at Redcliffe Qld Australia"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 144 - "Sunrise at Redcliffe Qld Australia"

Original - David Raymond (David)
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Revision: 2 - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Taken with Kodak DX7440 on tripod.
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


June 20th 2005
17:35:27

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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2


June 20th 2005
17:36:18
(OK, Ali - tell me one more time why images have multiple 'names' on this site.  ;o)

Hi David,  Welcome.

It's a good capture, interesting sky and the plane gives it scale.  

I'm giving you a cropped version to look at.  Don't know that it's any better, but it's different.  

(And if you go back to reshoot it, tell the pilot to drop down a couple hundred feet so he's more centered in the bright spot.  ;o)

Your note says Kodak DX7740 and the EXIF says Nikon D70.  
[Edited: 17:41 - BobTrips ]

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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #3


June 20th 2005
17:45:56
Ali - Here's a bug.  I'm currently typing this and the Camera data belongs to some other image apparently.

(Sorry David.  We'll clean up all this stuff from your photo later when the bug has been squashed.)
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #4


June 20th 2005
18:11:30
Hi again David,  

First Workshop I've done on one of your images.  Let me give you a bit of information about my technique.  I don't spend a lot of time doing a careful job, just enough to get my ideas across (I hope).  I'll even over-do some things just to make the change more obvious.  

I'm not at all suggesting that 'my way' is better.  Not at all.  It's just a different way of looking at your photo.  If you like the ideas feel free to use them.  If you don't just ignore them.  My feelings won't be hurt.  ;o)

Also use the Replay function to discuss, ask questions, whatever about this photo.  The idea is that we're a club with members discussing each other's photos.

Oh, and feel free to critique some of mine....
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