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Discussion on: Image 1248 - "Sometimes..."

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1248 - "Sometimes..."

Original - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Camera	Pentax Corporation » Pentax K100d
Original Date	2007-01-16 17:15:43
Focal Length	50 mm
Aperture	f 5.6
ISO	800
Exposure Time	1/20 sec
Flash	No Flash
Tripod	No
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Justin Watson (Justin)
Msg: #1

March 21st 2007
11:55:51

Beautiful portrait Bob. Undecided if i like the other kid in the picture or not...
Welcome back, you are off to a good start with this pic from your recent trip.

(StraightnoChaser)
Msg: #2

March 30th 2007
16:50:25

I'd want the boy's face to jump off the page and cropped the right hand side of the picture. Also straightened a little since in the original shot, the girl seems to be falling off the page...or is that just my imagination?

Revision: 1
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(StraightnoChaser)
Msg: #3

March 30th 2007
16:52:17

....left hand side of the picture....

Adrian Warren (AdrianW)
Msg: #4

April 20th 2007
00:11:37

Nice shot Bob, might be tempted to fractionally desaturate the stuff behind the main persons head - and possibly lighten the red patch to the left a fraction too.

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