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Discussion on: Image 1248 - "Sometimes..."

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1248 - "Sometimes..."

Original - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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CameraPentax Corporation » Pentax K100d
Original Date2007-01-16 17:15:43
Focal Length50 mm
Aperturef 5.6
ISO800
Exposure Time1/20 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Sometimes life justs gives you great subjects.  

All you have to do is be there with your camera.

Bago, Mayanmar
Justin Watson (Justin)
Msg: #1


March 21st 2007
11:55:51
Beautiful portrait Bob. Undecided if i like the other kid in the picture or not...
Welcome back, you are off to a good start  with this pic from your recent trip.  
(StraightnoChaser)
Msg: #2


March 30th 2007
16:50:25
I'd want the boy's face to jump off the page and cropped the right hand side of the picture.  Also straightened a little since in the original shot, the girl seems to be falling off the page...or is that just my imagination?

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(StraightnoChaser)
Msg: #3


March 30th 2007
16:52:17
....left hand side of the picture....
Adrian Warren (AdrianW)
Msg: #4


April 20th 2007
00:11:37
Nice shot Bob, might be tempted to fractionally desaturate the stuff behind the main persons head - and possibly lighten the red patch to the left a fraction too.
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