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Discussion on: Image 1240 - "Tight Rope"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1240 - "Tight Rope"

Original - Peter A (Peter)
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CameraCanon » Canon Ixy Digital 800 Is
Original Date2000-02-18 21:15:05
Focal Length23.2 mm
Aperturef 5.5
ISO200
Exposure Time1/20 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
[Full Exif]
Photographers Note:
Acrobatic show in Beijing.
Cameron Karsten (cam2yogi)
Msg: #1


March 1st 2007
05:33:45
interesting shot.  Unfortunately, she's out of focus to my eye, which takes away from the photo.  If she were the main focus, it would draw me into the photo more.  Try a B&W with some heavy contrasting shadows to illuminate her, the spotlight and the background setting.  I think this would take away some of the little distractions like the wood's grain and the stage.
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2


March 19th 2007
03:18:27
Striking colors.  Try some selective sharpening to see if you can get the illusion of focus with your person.  

Thinking about it, small sensor camera (lots of DOF), good deal of distance from your subject, and 1/20th shutter speed suggests motion blur.  But try some sharpening anyway.
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