 | Discussion on: Image 1236 - "City Park" |
| Discussion on: Image 1236 - "City Park" |
Discussion on: Image 1236 - "City Park" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1236 - "City Park" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Cameron Karsten (cam2yogi) Msg: #1 February 15th 2007 18:18:10 | I think I'd cut out the ladder on the left, and go for an icy B&W, or icrease the colors and a tone of blue. I feel the image needs to feel colder, lonlier, empty and desolate. Again...awesome idea and composition. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #2 March 19th 2007 03:15:11 | Too bad the climbing structure is there in the background. If you could make the image only the horse and icy tree.... You might try cropping the ladder out and decreasing the saturation of the stuff behind the horse's head. Or try B&W as suggested. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Matt Esmay (Oscar) Msg: #3 March 28th 2007 02:40:05 | thanks for the input... I've been having some computer problems so I'll get some work done soon. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #4 April 19th 2007 23:00:12 | Nice shot! Interestingly the only thing that really bothers me here is the only thing that no-one's mentioned - the way the climbing frame sprouts from the rocking horse's head ;) | |||||||||||||||||||||
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