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Discussion on: Image 1169 - "Ashes of Siena"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1169 - "Ashes of Siena"

Original - Cameron Karsten (cam2yogi)
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CameraNikon » Nikon D200
Original Date2006-10-22 13:14:01
Focal Length18 mm
Aperturef 7.1
ISO400
Exposure Time1/180 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
Burnt Siena and Crayola's ashes.  Siena, Italy; the inspiration for color
Justin Watson (Justin)
Msg: #1


December 28th 2006
07:05:26
I keep looking at this picture, wondering what can eb said about it. I like it, but something is not right. My guess is the over exposed sky, maybe more detail in the sky, some moody dark clouds would have finished it off nicely. Still i like the composition and i can forgive you if you can't control the weather!
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2


December 29th 2006
04:45:07
That's about how I see it.

How about replacing the pure white with a faint rose?  And increasing the contrast a bit for the structural stuff?

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