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Discussion on: Image 1186 - "Angel in West Brompton Cemetry"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1186 - "Angel in West Brompton Cemetry"

Original - Animesh Singh (mr_rush)
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CameraNikon » D70
Original Date2006-08-28 14:15:40
Focal Length22 mm
Aperturef 4
ISO200
Exposure Time1/1600 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
I walked through West Brompton cemetry by chance on my way to Chelsea and Westminster hospital one day.  It reminded me of Parisian cemetries I'd seen in the past.  

The angel is framed reasonably well by the arch behind. There's good contrast between the simplicity of the building and the angel.
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


November 22nd 2006
23:47:31
Technically, I think this one is fine.  You held the sky, you kept the angel in focus and let the OOF run to into the distance thus increasing the depth.  You framed it nicely with your main subject to one side.

I think it would have been a bit stronger had you shot from just a little more to the right, a little higher, and a little closer to the wall.  I can sort of see a shot in my mind where the angle dominates the right edge of the frame, there's no wall showing on the left, and the roof edge and crosses converge in the distance.  Might have taken an even wider lens to get what I'm imagining.

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