 | Discussion on: Image 1168 - "A Taut Line" |
| Discussion on: Image 1168 - "A Taut Line" |
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| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1168 - "A Taut Line" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 November 16th 2006 18:16:57 | A very strong portrait. You've got a great pose and very good lighting going for you here. It might be just a tad over exposed or it could be my monitor settings that are loosing some detail in his shirt. The light spots in the upper left, I don't care for them. I tried a version in which I cropped down to loose the spots and to concentrate more on your subject. I also added a slight frame. |
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| Cameron Karsten (cam2yogi) Msg: #2 November 16th 2006 20:39:45 | Stunning Bob! I agree now after seeing the upper left. Your revision enhances it tremendously! | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #3 November 16th 2006 21:07:17 | Just for fun I tried something else. I cloned out the white spots in the upper left and added a thin frame. I wanted to see what role the tighter cropping played. My take at this point is that by cropping the man becomes "stronger". In the non-cropped version he comes across to me as more of a victim. (If that's the continuum that I'm after. Not sure.) (If you hit Reply you get a page where you can scroll and see any version with any other version.) |
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Revision: 3 Bob Wallace (BobTrips) |
Revision: 2 Bob Wallace (BobTrips) |
