 | Discussion on: Image 1164 - "Women of Experience" |
| Discussion on: Image 1164 - "Women of Experience" |
Discussion on: Image 1164 - "Women of Experience" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1164 - "Women of Experience" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Justin Watson (Justin) Msg: #1 November 10th 2006 08:42:34 | I like the exposure on this photo. The light might be just a tad bright on some parts of the front womans face, but its not too bad. I do like the skin textures and the eye contact she makes with anyone looking at the image. I think the second lady provides a question, as to where were the women and what are they doing. Probably adds some sort of a candid nature to the phot rather than a pose. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #2 November 10th 2006 23:04:39 | I can see toning down the highlights just a bit. And I noticed that I lost the detail in the foremost woman's shawl during editing. (It's there in the original.) At this temple there was some sort of ceremony/luncheon for a group of older women. In the traditional fashion they each wore a white shawl/sash over their left shoulder. I got there when things were winding down so can't tell you much more about what was happening. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #3 November 25th 2006 18:32:24 | Can't make up my mind whether I want the lighting to be more uniform or not... As it stands the closer one is much brighter. you could use shadows/highlights to tone her down and boost up the background one i suppose. up to you though! | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #4 November 25th 2006 19:57:30 | Evening out the light is better, seems to me. I sure produced a different look this time around. Wonder if I sharpened the first version? |
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