Discussion on: Image 1084 - "Carillion III"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1084 - "Carillion III"

Original - Justin Watson (Justin)
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Revision: 2 - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Photographers Note:
Taken early morning. I think i need a better tripod..... there appears to be a very slight slant.... anyway very happy by how the early light and the wispy clouds turned out in this one.

Image Details:

Camera	Pentax Corporation » Pentax Ist Dl2
Original Date	2006-09-02 07:34:16
Focal Length	18 mm
Aperture	f 13
ISO	200
Exposure Time	1/125 sec
Flash	No Flash
Tripod	No
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1

September 3rd 2006
01:27:04

How about a tighter crop? The subject here seems to be tower and reflection. The out-hanging tree provides a nice secondary subject. But you loose (I think) the strength of the shot by including a lot of unnecessary stuff.

(I straightened it for you.)

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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)

Justin Watson (Justin)
Msg: #2

September 3rd 2006
01:41:38

Hmmm yes and no. i see what you mean, but not sold on your crop.... maybe i need to play with the crop a bit.
I do like the deep blue tones in the sky though, but certainly a crop from the right doesn't hurt too much....

I have a heap from different angles and posted another one. I'll see what else i have I know i have some without the reflection, but none of them really impressed me.

hehe next time it will be a sunset shot ;-) I think using the same subject helps me more to improve my skills.

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