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Discussion on: Image 1074 - "Green and Gold 2"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 1074 - "Green and Gold 2"

Original - Justin Watson (Justin)
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Revision: 1 - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Photographers Note:
Hmm maybe this is better than the other one......
Image Details:
CameraPentax Corporation » Pentax Ist Dl2
Original Date2006-08-27 12:10:54
Focal Length35 mm
Aperturef 8
ISO800
Exposure Time1/125 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2


August 27th 2006
17:17:58
Try cropping down a bit.  I also did a bit of Levels adjusting.

I agree with Adrian.  More DOF might have been a good thing here.  Carrying focus back further while smoothing out the background might have been better.  You've got two subjects, buds and blossoms.  Both should be shown.

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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Justin Watson (Justin)
Msg: #3


August 28th 2006
07:50:54
No worries. I have some in the backyard i will practise on :-) The DOF is challenging with the details of the buds and flowers :-)

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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)