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Discussion on: Image 966 - "A flower"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 966 - "A flower"

Original - Justin Watson (Justin)
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Revision: 2 - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Photographers Note:
No idea what it is but took it in a botanical garden with a closeup filter on the lens.
Image Details:
CameraPentax Corporation » Pentax Ist Dl2
Original Date2006-06-11 16:02:42
Focal Length50 mm
Aperturef 2
ISO200
Exposure Time1/90 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2


August 1st 2006
01:29:55
Good use of shallow DOF to isolate your subject.  

I tried a version in which I cropped it down to move the flower out of dead center of the frame, decreased the highlights a bit, and selectively sharpened.

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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Justin Watson (Justin)
Msg: #3


August 1st 2006
09:38:09
I might not have cropped so tightly on the right, but yeah i think there is nothing on the right, whereas the left has a out of focus flower. I posted some others in the nature club on here, but no one seems to be active over there. I'm looking for a cheap macro lens now, although again a closeup filter and large aperture does a good job.
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Revision: 2
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)