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Discussion on: Image 113 - "Misty morning"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 113 - "Misty morning"

Original - Andy Leach (RedAndy)
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CameraOlympus » C5050z
Original Date2004-01-22 07:28:19
Focal Length13.8 mm
Aperturef 8
ISO64
Exposure Time1/800 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
A pretty simple shot, I quite like the sunflare and it looks peaceful.

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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


June 11th 2005
10:45:03
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2


June 11th 2005
10:54:34
For some reason my Re-edit didn't post.  Listed bug on Support forum.

My idea was a higher on the bottom crop.  Reduce the black mass while maintaining the interesting silhouettes.

Some white spots here and there that could easily be cloned away.

A pass through Neat Image might improve the sky - haven't tried that (yet).
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #3


June 12th 2005
23:47:50
OK, this time it loaded.

I've got no idea what's going on....
[Edited: 23:48 - BobTrips ]

Revision: 1
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Camille (cnut)
Msg: #4


June 29th 2005
12:23:53
Hi Andy,
I just cropped a bit from all sides.  I like the flare but I felt that there was just a tad too much and I also cloned out the little tree in the lower right hand corner.

Revision: 2
Camille (cnut)
Andy Leach (RedAndy)
Msg: #5


June 29th 2005
17:40:12
Thanks Bob & Camille. Quite right, too much black and too much white :) The removal of the tree is a good move as well, removes a distraction, cheers.
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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