 | Discussion on: Image 786 - "Painting Notre Dame" |
| Discussion on: Image 786 - "Painting Notre Dame" |
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| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 786 - "Painting Notre Dame" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 July 19th 2006 15:30:25 | This, IMO, is a great image. I really like the extreme framing and the way that it looks more like a pencil drawing than a photograph. This shot evokes a lot of feeling for me. It's a feeling of loneliness and isolation in the middle of a great city. I tried a few little tweaks. First I used the Skew tool to straighten the columns a bit. (Don't think I got them exactly straight.) Then I cropped away just a bit from the right in order to eliminate that tiny bit of dark marble that I found distracting. Finally I cloned away the bright area surrounding the toe of the man's right foot. (I'm wondering if it would be better to darken his sock just a little? It seems very bright compared to everything else in the frame.) |
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| Cameron Karsten (cam2yogi) Msg: #2 July 19th 2006 23:28:56 | Great, thanks for the revision! | |||||||||||||||||||||
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