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Discussion on: Image 98 - "Late Afternoon Nap"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 98 - "Late Afternoon Nap"

Original - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Revision: 2 - Adrian Warren (AdrianW)
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Photographers Note:
The day starts early in the wholesale produce market and the back of the pickup is an excellent place to swing one's hammock.

Bangkok, Thailand
Image Details:
CameraKonica Minolta » DiMAGE A1
Original Date2005-01-23 16:46:13
Focal Length37.52734375 mm
Aperturef 5
ISO100
Exposure Time1/100 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Adrian Warren (AdrianW)
Msg: #5


June 10th 2005
12:46:56
The baskets are part of the environment, but IMO there isn't enough of them for it to be a true environmental portrait - so I'd probably knock 'em on the head myself.

This would be a quick and dirty of what I'd do...

Cropped, and then Shadows/Highlights Highlights@100%

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Adrian Warren (AdrianW)
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #6


June 10th 2005
12:55:15
Yep, I like that.  

I'd probably tone down the 'red stuff' a bit as well.  Draws my eye there and makes me ask "What's that?"  And there's no answer.

Adrian Warren (AdrianW)
Msg: #7


June 10th 2005
13:09:43
Right, roughly selected the red rope with Lasso, then used Hue/Saturation Red/-30 to tone down the rope. Used a little USM on the face to bring out his expression slightly more. Also cropped fractionally tighter... I hope you like :)

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Adrian Warren (AdrianW)
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #8


June 10th 2005
14:01:31
You good!

Bet his mama would like a copy of that one.

thanks...
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