 | Discussion on: Image 852 - "Outside the Local Market" |
| Discussion on: Image 852 - "Outside the Local Market" |
Discussion on: Image 852 - "Outside the Local Market" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 852 - "Outside the Local Market" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Peter A (Peter) Msg: #1 June 26th 2006 14:17:40 | I've been looking at this shot for a couple days now, very unsure of what to do with it. In the end, I cropped and increased the contrast. I was having trouble keeping the bench from being awkward, but including the bopttom leg and the graffiti above it in the shot helped that, I think. Here is my revision. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Peter A (Peter) Msg: #2 June 26th 2006 14:18:03 | I also did a sharpen on it. |
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #3 June 26th 2006 14:56:59 | Thanks. I think that helps a lot. I really liked the mood set by the illustration and colors but wasn't getting what I wanted. It felt to me that there was a better picture somewhere in there, I just hadn't found it. One problem with the scene, overall, is that the sidewalk is sloping down to the left and that make the bench angled in relation to the other horizontal and vertical lines. | |||||||||||||||||||||
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Revision: 2 Peter A (Peter) |
