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Discussion on: Image 852 - "Outside the Local Market"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 852 - "Outside the Local Market"

Original - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Revision: 2 - Peter A (Peter)
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Photographers Note:
Reykajavik, Iceland.
Image Details:
CameraPanasonic » Dmcfz5
Original Date2005-06-04 18:03:25
Focal Length14.5 mm
Aperturef 8
ISO80
Exposure Time1/200 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Peter A (Peter)
Msg: #2


June 26th 2006
14:18:03
I also did a sharpen on it.

Revision: 2
Peter A (Peter)
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #3


June 26th 2006
14:56:59
Thanks.  I think that helps a lot.  

I really liked the mood set by the illustration and colors but wasn't getting what I wanted.  It felt to me that there was a better picture somewhere in there, I just hadn't found it.

One problem with the scene, overall, is that the sidewalk is sloping down to the left and that make the bench angled in relation to the other horizontal and vertical lines.
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Revision: 2
Peter A (Peter)