 | Discussion on: Image 872 - "The Cellar Window" |
| Discussion on: Image 872 - "The Cellar Window" |
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| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 872 - "The Cellar Window" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Peter A (Peter) Msg: #1 June 26th 2006 13:56:17 | This one jumped off the screen at me. I really like the vent silhouette (sic?) and think it is well placed in the shot. I also like the window grid and the dirtiness of the glass. I think the vent is heavy enough to where if you brightened the leaves and brought out some nice, bold greens, it wouldn't detract from the shot at all. You might also try a crop on the left side, and take that solid black part of the window out. Then the vent would just sort of be suspended with no clear anchor. I'll work on a repost of it. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Peter A (Peter) Msg: #2 June 26th 2006 14:04:34 | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Peter A (Peter) Msg: #3 June 26th 2006 14:05:37 | With the crop, a little fill light, and a sharpen. I havent figured GIMP out yet, so this is from Picasa. |
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| Peter A (Peter) Msg: #4 June 26th 2006 14:07:19 | I thought it looked cool in sepia too. |
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #5 June 26th 2006 15:11:27 | Thanks for all that. Your crop suggested something else to me. Let's look at a crop that evens out the top/left and right/bottom area thus making things a bit more 'regular'. |
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| Peter A (Peter) Msg: #6 June 26th 2006 17:46:36 | I like the square crop a lot. It emphasizes the square of the vent and presents it in a more pleasing way I think. | |||||||||||||||||||||
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