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Discussion on: Image 854 - "Faith in Smile"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 854 - "Faith in Smile"

Original - Cameron Karsten (cam2yogi)
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CameraNikon » Nikon D70s
Original Date2005-11-25 16:50:39
Focal Length18 mm
Aperturef 5
ISO200
Exposure Time1/100 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
Shall their own hearts be the source of their happiness and comfort
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


June 20th 2006
02:45:55
Good colors, good framing, good catching a good moment.  I think this framing works well but also try a version where you crop off a lot of the bottom. leaving basically the faces and interesting background.
Cameron Karsten (cam2yogi)
Msg: #2


June 20th 2006
11:29:04
Ah, I like that.  It would look stunning to focus more on the faces, but the element of his knees spread wide while above their heads huddle together...I like that contrast.  Though, I could definitely shave a little more off and keep it complete.
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #3


June 20th 2006
15:29:15
Yep.  I like that crop too.  

As a general rule, eliminating the 'unimportant/uninteresting' stuff from the frame either when shooting or cropping concentrates the important/interesting stuff.

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