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Discussion on: Image 73 - "Breaking Brahman"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 73 - "Breaking Brahman"

Original - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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CameraKonica Minolta » DiMAGE A1
Original Date2005-02-04 17:03:36
Focal Length34.3515625 mm
Aperturef 3.5
ISO100
Exposure Time1/200 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
Priest takes an afternoon nap in the mandapam of the Jalakanteshwara Temple.


Vellore, Northern Tamil Nadu, India
Adrian Warren (AdrianW)
Msg: #1


June 5th 2005
18:29:40
Another excellent shot, this is probably my favourite of those you've posted so far - although I really like the statues too. Not much to suggest here, maybe crop the right again? The sticks just intruding into the frame (?a broom?) are marginally distracting, as is the white patch, but to be honest they're really minor and I quite like the image with this aspect ratio...
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2


June 5th 2005
18:33:18
Good point about the intruding 'stuff'.  Maybe some cloning would work best.  I like the frame ratio.  There seems to be some balance between light and dark.
Andy Leach (RedAndy)
Msg: #3


June 7th 2005
04:34:28
Did the cloning just to see how it would look - I can always use the practice - and to save everyone else using their imagination :-)

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Andy Leach (RedAndy)
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #4


June 8th 2005
12:40:17
Much better with the distractions cloned away.  Thanks.
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Andy Leach (RedAndy)