Discussion on: Image 849 - "Desolate Tree"

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Discussion on: Image 849 - "Desolate Tree"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 849 - "Desolate Tree"

Original - Justin Watson (Justin)
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Camera	Pentax Corporation » Pentax Ist Dl2
Original Date	2006-06-11 12:58:22
Focal Length	80 mm
Aperture	f 22
ISO	200
Exposure Time	1/90 sec
Flash	No Flash
Tripod	No
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Photographers Note:
A tree taken in the mountains of Australia. A Bushfire went through here a few years ago, thus the green regrowth around the base of the tree. There is even snow on the mountains in the distance. It was cold around 5C when i took it, hopefully the photo looks as cold as it was.

Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1

June 18th 2006
15:47:33

From the thumbnail I though you had shot a baobab tree.

Nice job.  I like the way you framed the main subject off to the side and left a 'vista' on the right.

I don't think there's much of interest in the bottom of the frame and by cropping it you can lower the tree in the frame thus making it feel more 'stable' and giving a more panoramic feel.  And try a bit more sharpening.

Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2

June 23rd 2006
01:32:28

Here's the version that I generated while I was writing my critique.

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