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Discussion on: Image 747 - "Spider Vendors"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 747 - "Spider Vendors"

Original - Richard Kelly Cotton (Wei Long)
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CameraFujifilm » Finepix S7000
Original Date2004-08-18 10:18:23
Focal Length26 mm
Aperturef 4
ISO200
Exposure Time1/240 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
These are the legendary deep fried spiders from the town of Skuon in Cambodia. I tried a couple but they aren't anything to write home about!
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


May 3rd 2006
05:14:38
Nice candid shot.  So much better that catching her looking at the camera.  Wish we could see one of the spiders a bit clearer.  I would have assumed that these were crabs without your note.

A bit over exposed (check the blown out sky).  And the bit of a person in the lower left is distracting.  I cropped and then used the Highlight tool to darken the lightest areas.  Think about setting the EV down a bit in these bright daylight conditions.

Revision: 1
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Adrian Warren (AdrianW)
Msg: #2


May 14th 2006
19:54:24
agree with bob on all counts - the only thing i might also suggest is a slightly tighter vertical composition - it would remove the truck and the kid, as well as perhaps getting more of the tree in the shot... anyway, well captured :D
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)