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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 May 3rd 2006 05:14:38 | Nice candid shot. So much better that catching her looking at the camera. Wish we could see one of the spiders a bit clearer. I would have assumed that these were crabs without your note. A bit over exposed (check the blown out sky). And the bit of a person in the lower left is distracting. I cropped and then used the Highlight tool to darken the lightest areas. Think about setting the EV down a bit in these bright daylight conditions. |
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| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #2 May 14th 2006 19:54:24 | agree with bob on all counts - the only thing i might also suggest is a slightly tighter vertical composition - it would remove the truck and the kid, as well as perhaps getting more of the tree in the shot... anyway, well captured :D | |||||||||||||||||||||
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