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Discussion on: Image 685 - "Newcastle"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 685 - "Newcastle"

Original - Justin Watson (Justin)
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CameraFujifilm » Finepix S5000
Original Date2005-06-20 17:57:16
Focal Length9.4 mm
Aperturef 2.8
ISO200
Exposure Time1/28 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
Shot this view of the Newcastle Headland and lighthouse fairly late in the day. Already cropped out a fence.
(Eduard)
Msg: #1


April 23rd 2006
09:50:33
Justin: I like the image and know how hard these are to make.  Did you take a horizontal one?  More of the water visibile might give a more remote feeling.  I took a quick pass with Photoshop and tweaked the levels, slightly (4%) increased the shadows and applied a violer filter at 15%..  What do you think?

Revision: 1
(Eduard)
Christopher Kean (chriskean1)
Msg: #2


April 24th 2006
05:29:09
Here's another idea--a crop removing the water in foreground, to accentuate the well-captured wave.  Nice shot.

Revision: 2
Christopher Kean (chriskean1)
Justin Watson (Justin)
Msg: #3


April 25th 2006
00:54:56
I have a look at what photos i have from this day. This was probably the better one. i was trying to get the wave and water in with the lighthouse and the sky.
From memory there was a white fence i didn't want in the frame......
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