Discussion on: Image 694 - "Divers"

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Discussion on: Image 694 - "Divers"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 694 - "Divers"

Original - Richard Kelly Cotton (Wei Long)
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Revision: 2 - Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
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Photographers Note:
I took a series like this whilst sheltering from the rain in the vicinity of Angkor Wat on my first day in Siem Reap. The weather couldn't dampen these kids enthusiasm.

Image Details:

Camera	Fujifilm » Finepix S7000
Original Date	2004-08-18 18:24:16
Focal Length	14 mm
Aperture	f 2.9
ISO	200
Exposure Time	1/180 sec
Flash	No Flash
Tripod	No
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2

April 22nd 2006
16:01:28

I think Brian was on the right track. Cropping down will make your subjects more dominate. (The old "If a picture doesn't grab you, you weren't close enough." Was that Capa?)

Here's another cropped version. I like the onlookers. That adds a bit more to the 'story' - the little guys watching the big guys.

I used the Shadow/Highlight tool and sharpened to bring out a bit detail.

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