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Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 660 - ""

Original - Jelda Jayne (jelda)
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CameraNikon » E4200
Original Date2006-03-19 06:32:18
Focal Length7.8 mm
Aperturef 4.8
ISO486670415
Exposure Time1/2048 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
Panglao beach, Philippines
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


April 21st 2006
01:32:59
That is one bright sun.  Almost hard to look at it on the monitor.  ;o)

I think you did a good job with framing, good strong elements on the left to set off the sun and a nice open area on the right.  And you caught a very good moment.  Works for me.

I cropped down a bit to give the picture more of a panoramic feel.  I cloned out that spec of a bird.  And I sharpened.  You  should be able to see crisper edges on the tree line.

I think you could have had a better picture had you exposed a bit less.  I think (not sure) that you would have gotten a stronger silhouette from the forward boat and you would have held the detail in the water better.  Good time and place to be bracketing.

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