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Discussion on: Image 671 - "Siesta"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 671 - "Siesta"

Original - Michael (Michael)
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CameraPentax Corporation » Pentax Ist Ds
Original Date2004-04-27 22:22:42
Focal Length50 mm
Aperturef 5.6
ISO200
Exposure Time1/125 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
This chilean guy is relaxing a bit after lunch in Punta Arenas
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


April 19th 2006
02:46:52
Good catch.  Love the play between all the graffiti and the sleeper.  (Wish I had this sleeper.  I've got a collection going.)

I tried a couple things with your shot.  I straightened it a bit so that the post lined up with the frame, then I cropped down tighter.  I think the crop eliminates the bit of blown out sky and uninteresting (to me) roof and concentrates the important elements.  A bit more contrast and sharpened.

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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
(Eduard)
Msg: #2


April 19th 2006
11:07:41
Great eye to see the image and another example of critically reviwing and cropping for impact.  Nice teamwork guys!
Michael (Michael)
Msg: #3


May 2nd 2006
12:35:28
Thanks Bob for making the new size. I took the photo but my son saw the image. If anybody wants to sleep deeply like him, I think you just have to take a lot of wine with your lunch, much more wine than lunch...
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)