 | Discussion on: Image 639 - "Walk What Plank?" |
| Discussion on: Image 639 - "Walk What Plank?" |
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| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 639 - "Walk What Plank?" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 April 16th 2006 21:28:40 | It's good. Not often do I think that shooting straight down the middle works, but this time I think it does. Try a version where you crop a lot of the sky off the top. Make the ocean a stronger element. And I wonder how it would have been had you shot from a lot lower? That might have given even more depth. (Just speculating here....) | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #2 April 16th 2006 21:32:52 | OK, I don't like my cropping idea. Decided to give it a try. But I did increase contrast and sharpen. That seems to make the pilings stronger elements, IMO. |
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| Christopher Kean (chriskean1) Msg: #3 April 18th 2006 12:49:08 | This is a stunner with a beautiful sense of depth and, oddly, both stasis and motion. My only suggestion would be to try cropping out (or otherwise removing) the mildly distracting bit of detritus on the left about one-fifth of the way up from the bottom. Really a lovely shot. CK | |||||||||||||||||||||
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