Discussion on: Image 587 - "Egypt Pyramids"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 587 - "Egypt Pyramids"

Original - sakina elle (sakina)
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Camera	Konica Minolta Camera, Inc. » Dimage Xg
Original Date	2004-12-10 19:23:29
Focal Length	17.1 mm
Aperture	f 8
ISO	50
Exposure Time	1/111 sec
Flash	No Flash
Tripod	No
[Full Exif]

Photographers Note:
Chance shot through a bus window.

Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1

April 4th 2006
03:06:05

And a good job grabbing a quick shot out of the window it was.  In my opinion there's not much of interest in the top of the frame and the camel is a little tight against the left side.  I cropped down the top and 'increased the canvas' on the left and cloned in some more ground to open things up a bit.

I also rotated a little, I'm not sure if it was enough.  And I increased contrast and sharpened.  If you wanted to take things further you might clone away the pipe as is adds nothing IMO to the shot.

But you did the most important things correctly.  You got yourself there with camera.  You saw a good image.  And you managed to take the shot.  Everything else is just fine tuning.

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