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Discussion on: Image 572 - "Mozambique sunset"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 572 - "Mozambique sunset"

Original - Justin Watson (Justin)
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CameraFujifilm » Finepix S5000
Original Date2005-08-07 16:54:25
Focal Length13.6 mm
Aperturef 9
ISO200
Exposure Time1/950 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
Taken on the Bazaruto archipelago off the coast of Mozambique. African sunsets are amazing.
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


March 30th 2006
02:10:21
You did a good job of avoiding lens flare.  And you pretty much nailed the exposure.

I do wish you had pulled back some more and captured all of the man in the foreground and more of the palm.  Those two elements work well to frame the scene and add depth, but there's so little of them that they seem accidental to me.


I straightened the horizon, cropped away the half man and bit of palm.  It might work to leave the man in, however.  Also boosted contrast and sharpened.

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