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Discussion on: Image 513 - "Madrid bar snack"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 513 - "Madrid bar snack"

Original - Kristina Johnson (wired2theworld)
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CameraNikon » E7900
Original Date2005-10-16 04:01:40
Focal Length7.8 mm
Aperturef 2.8
ISO50
Exposure Time1/30 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


March 19th 2006
01:05:42
Having fun playing with your images.  ;o)  

I like this one.  Makes me hungry.  Calamari?  You got nice and tight on your subject, got good focus and exposure.

I'm a little bothered by the extra 'stuff' in the frame.  I tried a version in which I cropped tighter and cloned out what I couldn't crop away.  

I also darkened, increased contrast, and sharpened.  

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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Kristina Johnson (wired2theworld)
Msg: #2


March 19th 2006
03:31:21
Wow, I like your version better. It really pops now. And I'm glad you left in the olives, they are quintessential Spanish bar culture.
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #3


March 19th 2006
04:12:32
Well, I did crop out the pit.  

It interfered with my fantasy that I was going to get to eat the meal.  Looked like someone had already started....
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