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Discussion on: Image 334 - "Valencia Gardens"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 334 - "Valencia Gardens"

Original - Kate Monro (katypie)
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CameraCanon » Canon Powershot S50
Original Date2005-07-14 01:26:36
Focal Length10.3125 mm
Aperturef 5.6
ISO
Exposure Time1/1000 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
Hi, this is my very first photo I've posted to Blind Pig.  As I say in my membership profile I'm a complete beginner, but keen to learn, so all tips and suggestions would be much appreciated.  I'm actually reasonably pleased with this shot, and I chose to post it because I don't have enough nerve to post the really shoddy ones just yet!!
Ali Watters (Ali)
Msg: #1


July 27th 2005
15:17:05
Hi Kate - welcome to the Pig! - I like this shot - the shadow of the palms on the fountain is really interesting.

On the criticism side - the sky is over exposed - but I don't think it detracts from the image too much. I don't know how well it would have worked in this situation but a polarising filter might have reduced the glare a bit.
Camille (cnut)
Msg: #2


July 28th 2005
01:12:30
Hi Kate, welcome to Jeber and the Pig.  Nice curtain effect created by the fountain.  I added more saturation to the shot and darkened the sky in an attempt to bring out more detail in the fountain.

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Camille (cnut)
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