 | Discussion on: Image 328 - "Tranquility" |
| Discussion on: Image 328 - "Tranquility" |
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| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 328 - "Tranquility" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Walt Foster (Walt) Msg: #1 July 26th 2005 12:50:13 | Well Ben, I like the peacefulness of the scene, but I cropped out the stuff in the foreground and increased saturation and contrast a bit... what do you think? |
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #2 July 27th 2005 12:32:30 | I like the crop. In the OP the foreground water is just too distracting. The saturation/contrast tweaks. First let me say that what I see on my screen is not necessarily what you see on yours. (Wonder how long it will be before inexpensive monitor calibration is available?) But based on the way my monitor is rendering Rev 1 I would say that the new version is a bit 'vivid'. A slightly less boosted version might have a more peaceful feel. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Ben Wouters (baw) Msg: #3 July 27th 2005 17:08:03 | I was looking for something in the foreground to give some depth to the shot. The small strip of gras just isn't enough. Maybe this is just another shot that would have worked better in portrait orientation. I'm beginning to believe that a lot of landscapes work best in portrait orientation ;-) Your crop looks good, although i'm missing the depth i was looking for. Walt. Your versions colours look unnatural on my montor. (too harsh) I've a LINK to a site where they have a pic to judge your monitors colours It gives a pic with recognisable scenes to judge the colours. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Camille (cnut) Msg: #4 July 28th 2005 00:46:33 | Ben beautiful shot, very serene. I did a crop and added a little saturation and darkened the highlights. I thought about toning down the light spots on the water. |
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