 | Discussion on: Image 318 - "Segovia, Spain" |
| Discussion on: Image 318 - "Segovia, Spain" |
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| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 318 - "Segovia, Spain" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 July 17th 2005 20:14:00 | I think that this is one place where the 'rule of thirds' might yield a better image. Try a crop that drops the wall lower in the frame. (Quick check: scroll down so that the bottom of the wall reaches the bottom of the screen.) Outside that it's a well done image. Nicely focused and exposed. Good color. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Andy Leach (RedAndy) Msg: #2 July 27th 2005 05:34:22 | This captures the feel of Spain so well ( I'm a big, big fan of Spain, in case I haven't already mentioned.. :) I thought losing some sky and raising the town up might help focus on the classic mix of spanish structures more, typicaly I was wrong. So I ended up removing some sky, some greenery and a bit of the wall from each end! I didn't touch the colours/sharpen/clone or anything else as it all looks wonderful. I'd love to see some more from this area if you have them. |
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| Ben Wouters (baw) Msg: #3 July 27th 2005 17:25:12 | I'm not sure about Andy's crop. I feel the wall in the left of the pic adds depth to the scene. The original has the tower in one of the points of focus, with the highest tree leading towards it. I like it as it is. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Camille (cnut) Msg: #4 July 28th 2005 00:34:26 | Walt, I tried a crop that is in between the original and Andy's. |
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