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Discussion on: Image 293 - "Daroca Roofs"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 293 - "Daroca Roofs"

Original - Andy Leach (RedAndy)
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CameraOlympus » C5050z
Original Date2003-10-08 15:08:44
Focal Length17.6 mm
Aperturef 4
ISO64
Exposure Time1/800 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
I suspect that the biggest problem with this image is the lack of focal point/subject, but it's something I'm likely to try over and over again until I get a great one so your input is very welcome :)

This version has been sharpened a little but not much else has been done. I have sharpened and saturated versions but the lines on the roof start to suffer quite easily when I've worked on it. I've taken a little time to clone out the bright spot in the roof at the top of the image too, I'm not convinced it's an improvement.

Taken from the top of Daroca, Spain
Ben Wouters (baw)
Msg: #1


July 4th 2005
22:21:23
I do like these kind of shots. The patterns are appealing imo. Pity about all the antennas. I haven't found a good way to represent this kind of view either.

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Ben Wouters (baw)
Msg: #2


July 4th 2005
22:22:20

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Ben Wouters (baw)
Msg: #3


July 4th 2005
22:24:46
Appearently i went more for the detailled view. Isn't satisfying either. Perhaps somewhere in between?

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Andy Leach (RedAndy)
Msg: #4


July 4th 2005
23:58:22
Hm, interesting, you've got me thinking. What makes your 'final' image the strongest in my mind is the angle between the two sets of lines, maybe that kind of contrast is what's missing from the roofs of Daroca. There are some angles in there but they're off to the side, a bit more of a zoom in and turning to the left a bit might have helped.

The tv aerials never really bothered me until now, but they do weaken the meeting of the lines further.
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