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Discussion on: Image 278 - "Golden Creek"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 278 - "Golden Creek"

Original - Camille (cnut)
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CameraKonica Minolta » Dimage Z3
Original Date2004-10-14 14:59:14
Focal Length10.2920532227 mm
Aperturef 3.2
ISO454688818
Exposure Time1/40 sec
FlashUnknown: 2
TripodNo
[Full Exif]
Photographers Note:
West Creek Preserve Parma, Ohio
Walt Foster (Walt)
Msg: #1


July 4th 2005
09:25:12
Nice shot Camille... I just increased saturation and contrast a little.

Revision: 1
Walt Foster (Walt)
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2


July 4th 2005
09:39:12
I took Walt's version and cropped a bit to bring the large rock into the corner to anchor the frame.  And sharpened a bit.  (Note: I should have started with a larger version, this one's getting a little short on pixels.)

Revision: 2
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Camille (cnut)
Msg: #3


July 4th 2005
09:47:06
Thanks guys for the much needed improvements.
Andy Leach (RedAndy)
Msg: #4


July 4th 2005
12:37:50
You have great colours in your part of the world - looking forward to seeing more of these :-)

I was a little bothered by the sky on this one, it seems to be a bit overexposed - difficult to avoid in low light ( I can't see the EXIF on this reply so I'm assuming... ) and it cried out 'bookmark!' to me. I'd love a copy of this is my book as I curled up next to a warm fire with a glass of red wine, mmmm. Hope you like it, i didn't do anything with the image apart from crop - Walt and Bob seem to have it covered.

Revision: 3
Andy Leach (RedAndy)
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #5


July 4th 2005
13:48:44
Congratulations Andy.  I think you just caused Walt to rethink his thinking once more.   ;o)

I can see this one as a tall print where one has a bit of skinny wall such as between two doors.
Andy Leach (RedAndy)
Msg: #6


July 4th 2005
14:35:48
:-))

I just remembered that I did do something else - there was a little bright patch of sky in the trees, I cloned it out. Fwiw I prefer Bob's idea of a thin print to the bookmark - maybe both would be even better...
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Revision: 3
Andy Leach (RedAndy)

Revision: 2
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)

Revision: 1
Walt Foster (Walt)