 | Discussion on: Image 262 - "Queen's Bath - Hampi" |
| Discussion on: Image 262 - "Queen's Bath - Hampi" |
Discussion on: Image 262 - "Queen's Bath - Hampi" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 262 - "Queen's Bath - Hampi" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Dave Mayer (Kane) Msg: #1 July 3rd 2005 05:36:30 | Now you've done it - you've gotten me thinking. With my clone brush, and a fair dose of City Bean Guatemala/Antigua Estate coffee, I removed the graffitti, added the peak of the window (wasn't paying attention when I shot it), straightened and cropped. I think it's much better than the original. |
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| Dave Mayer (Kane) Msg: #2 July 3rd 2005 06:01:01 | Ooops, meant to work on the color before I sent the first one. |
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #3 July 3rd 2005 06:36:43 | Showing some real progress here Dave. I like the life you brought into Rev 2. It might be just a touch too much 'brightness' for my taste, but better than where you started. How about the dark shadow in the lower left? Did you consider cloning it back a bit? | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Camille (cnut) Msg: #4 July 3rd 2005 06:44:59 | Dave, great picture in picture effect and I like your revision. I cropped a bit off of the left to remove the black frame from the next window. I did some cloning to straighten the lower left corner of the window frame and removed what was left of the black in the lower left corner. I also cloned out the black spot in the upper right hand corner. |
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| Dave Mayer (Kane) Msg: #5 July 3rd 2005 12:10:13 | Thanks, Bob & Camille. Yes, perhaps too bright, but it was the first time trying that. I'm not done with the next revision, but instead of cropping (I liked the window in the center), I cloned out the black on the far left, and it looks like the wall continues. I can 't decide on the shadow at the bottom left yet... Always manana.. Thanks.. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Dave Mayer (Kane) Msg: #6 July 4th 2005 14:18:28 | So.... this is more finished. Following Camille (but staying sufficiently behind so I don't bump into her <grin>) I ADDED a stone to the black spot in the upper left, and worked on the shadows on the bottom left and the window bottom. Guess I'll never be happy <grin>... |
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #7 July 4th 2005 19:44:28 | If you hit Reply so that you can look at Rev 1 (your original, I believe) and Rev 4 (your latest version) I think you'll see quite an improvement. Good job Dave. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Dave Mayer (Kane) Msg: #8 July 6th 2005 04:54:14 | Thanks, Bob... Glad I found this place.. | |||||||||||||||||||||
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