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Discussion on: Image 221 - "Cape Buffalo and Friend"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 221 - "Cape Buffalo and Friend"

Original - Walt Foster (Walt)
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CameraCanon » Digital Rebel
Original Date2004-10-05 06:09:20
Focal Length340 mm
Aperturef 5.6
ISO100
Exposure Time1/160 sec
FlashFlash, Aut
TripodNo
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Photographers Note:
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Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #1


July 2nd 2005
18:47:30

Revision: 1
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Bob Wallace (BobTrips)
Msg: #2


July 2nd 2005
18:51:31
You've got something very nice here.  Good pose from the beasties - one looking right, one left.  The problem that I see is that the background is imposing on your big guy.  It took me a while to figure out that there must be another buff in the back.  I tried darkening the background a bit, maybe even more would be better.  I also lightened up the area around his eye a bit - tried to reduce the shadow.  I cropped a bit as well.  Tried to make the head look as massive as possible.
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