 | Discussion on: Image 201 - "Ohio Amish" |
| Discussion on: Image 201 - "Ohio Amish" |
Discussion on: Image 201 - "Ohio Amish" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 201 - "Ohio Amish" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 July 2nd 2005 07:43:58 |
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #2 July 2nd 2005 08:01:42 | Geez, you've got some good stuff to shoot around there. I'd forgotten how beautiful that part of the country can be. I think in this case you saw a good shot but didn't get close enough. I did a crop where I cut away the less interesting (to me) parts in order to make the more interesting more prominent. I also lightened the darker part with the Dodge Tool, some of the detail is too dark on my monitor. I finally thought. If you had waited just a moment or two the horse and buggy might have moved into a more prominent position. | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Jacqueline (Jackie) Msg: #3 July 2nd 2005 16:44:18 | yeah that guard rail is a little distracting huh We do have some beautiful country here in Ohio and I had the thought too about the horse and buggy, We waited but they went the other way LOL I was going to wait till they got closer and crop the picture more for the second but they went left instead of right. Im going to try and get more Amish this year they are getting better about pictures. Thanks I am having too much fun in here. Thanks | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #4 July 3rd 2005 14:14:09 | Actually I like the guard rail, I think it provides a good lead-in to the image. I'd crop it differently again though. In addition to the crop, I used Shadows/Highlights 30%/0 to bring out a little of the shadow detail. I hope you like it :) |
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| Adrian Warren (AdrianW) Msg: #5 July 3rd 2005 14:15:12 | Still wondering whether it needs a little rotation, that tower doesn't seem quite straight to me... | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Jacqueline (Jackie) Msg: #6 July 3rd 2005 18:47:31 | Hey lighting the picture does make it a little better but I really like the sylo cropped out. Very nice Thanks I think the guardrail adds a little to the picture too It takes you to the store front. I also like the design of it in the forground, since its there use it huh? | |||||||||||||||||||||
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Revision: 2 Adrian Warren (AdrianW) |
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